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You recently attend a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. -Say where you think you left the paper -Explain why they are so important - Tell the manager what you want him/her to do

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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to inform you that I left my
papers
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 at your hotel after attending the
last
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week
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 meeting on Thursday. I am grateful if you could keep my documents.
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 with, I attended a meeting on the
second
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 level and the
room
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 name is TM-03 which is located on the opposite side of the sitting
room
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. There are so many seats with a rectangle conference table in that
room
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 as
this
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 is a big
room
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 for meeting and I think my paper might be in
this
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room
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. To be precise, it might be under the conference table because as I remember, I didn’t let any of my property on that table. To be frank, some
papers
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 are invoices
papers
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, and the others are documents for new projects.
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, those
papers
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 are important for me to make claims and proceed with project planning. I would like you to keep my documents on behave of me as I am currently on a business trip and I will come and take my
papers
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 once I get back from my trip. Thank you in advance for your kind support. Yours faithfully, Sandar Myint
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