In education and employment, some people work harder than others. Why do some people work harder? Is it always a good thing to work hard?
When it comes to
work
and education
, some people work
harder than others . There is an argument in society
regarding the positivity of hard work
.This
essay will discuss the reasons for hard work
and is it always advisable or not.
Turning into hard work
, there are two main occasions people tend to do hard work
. Over-commitment can be seen in education
to ensure higher grades. As we all know well,education
is the number one tool to establish a better social status. For example
, a student from a poor family can find a well-paid job through better education
. Secondly
, people do hard work
to ensure promotions. For Instance
, those who do hard work
are appreciated at work
.
However
, society
has come to the point to discuss the consequences of hard work
.In my view, hard work
both in education
and work
is always not positive.On one hand values of society
have drastically gone down due to the competitive nature of education
.For instance
, no one cares about social values instead
put all their effort into education
for better grades.On the other hand
, moral values are hardly taken into consideration for evaluation .This
will lead employees to do additional hours to make sure their next
salary increases and they will totally ignore the family life. For example
, there are many kids who don't even have any time to see their parents regularly.
in conclusion, the main reason for hard work
in both at workplace and education
is competition. While this
is not advisable to have a quality society
, occasional commitments are needed to meet increasing demands.Submitted by urekagfatm on
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