Some people think that government funding for schools should be spent on science subjects rather than on other subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Without a doubt, with advanced technology, governments make an effort on establishing
science
schools or focusing on science
subjects
. Whereas some people contend that government
funding ought to be distributed to science
subjects
, I am holding an opposite opinion toward this
statement, and the reasons will be thoroughly elaborated on as follows.
Science
subjects
should not be spent more funding than other subjects
because not all students
like science
subjects
. In other words
, once the government
merely funds science
subjects
, students
who prefer other subjects
cannot benefit from this
policy. Take Taiwan for example
. Recently, the government
has allocated large amounts of funding to semiconductor-related academics since they are the leading industry to bring prosperity to Taiwan; however
, it is pretty unfair to students
who prefer arts-related subjects
. They cannot use that funding on their learning even though they pay the tuition fees or taxes.
Due to concentrating on science
subjects
, the imbalance of talents is another issue that should be concerned. To be more specific, because the government
is focusing on a single subject, other subjects
' talents would lose a chance and gain enough funding for learning, so a country’s industry will overly focus on a single industry. Take me as an example. Owing to studying a music-related subject which belongs to art subjects
, I deeply feel that the government
provides no funding for my subject. However
, my friends major in science
subjects
which governments provide large amounts of resources for such
as providing advanced machines and hiring excellent teachers to teach students
; relatively, other subjects
do not have such
enough funding and good resources.
In conclusion, based on the aforementioned, even though some people think cultivating talented people in science
subjects
is the best way for the country due to personal preferences and the imbalance of talents.Submitted by justin1996lin on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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