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Some employers want to be able to contact their staff at all time even on holidays . Does this development have more advantages than disadvantages

#employers #contact #staff #time #holidays #development
In
this
 day and age, there are often concerns about
maintainting
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maintaining
 a healthy balance between one’s
work
 and personal life.
However
, it is a
well established
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 practice among some
employers
 to keep in touch with their
employees
 even during holidays in
orders
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 to deal with the numerous
work related
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 problems to survive in the competitive business world. In
this
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 I will look at the advantages of having
on call
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 duties arranged and the disadvantages associated with being contacted by
employers
 all the time. On one hand, there are some organizations, where requesting staff members to take part in duties even
they
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 are on leave will be more advantageous to their clients. Take
health
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 sector as an example. In order to enhance public health, all the professionals including physicians and paramedics
needs
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 to
work
 harder around the clock, no matter what. In spite of the fact that they are being paid extra for the valuable service, it is more about
the
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job satisfaction in the long term. Another benefit of having
on call
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 shifts is in
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 of technical breakdowns.
In other
words
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 most
of
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employers
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the employers
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 have ready-made strategies to overcome unexpected issues associated with machinery
,
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 so that they will not lose profit.
For instance
, in many textile garments, staff are allocated to act out immediately in case of any breakdown, because they need to be as competitive as their counterparts to be consistent in business.
On the other hand
, if we consider the drawbacks of
this
 development, it will be difficult for
employees
 to switch off during holidays
,
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 because the call of duty is always in
back
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the back
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 of their minds.
As a result
, many staff members tend to have a poor
work life
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 balance and
more
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are more
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 likely to develop
stress related
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illness
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illnesses
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,
such
 as heart problems and mental disorders.
In addition
 to that, some
employees
 may cherish their personal relationships over a job they find toxic and may quit jobs. In conclusion,
this
 concept brings more advantages than disadvantages when
employees
 are concerned.
Therefore
employers
needs
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 to follow a well-balanced approach while implementing rules and regulations on indicating
on call
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 duties.
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