Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter • explain what has happened • describe the bag and its contents • say what you would like them to do about this problem

Dear Sir/Madam, I am Shobha,
Last
week on the 4th of May, I travelled to London from Montreal.The plane landed in London at 9am and the plane number is PA555.I forgot my laptop
bag
in the cabin as I was running late for my official meeting,
also
got a call from the office that could be the reason to forgot my stuff. It's a black
bag
with a tag of sky bags, ,
additionally
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there is a keychain attached to the
bag
with the 'S' symbol.Inside the
,
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bag
there is a laptop,AirPods as well as my personal diary.The laptop contains very valuable information that I would require for my professional meeting tomorrow at 3pm.In the front ,pocket there will be a business card which contains all my information. I would like you to keep it safe once you receive it.Kindly contact me by using the information on my business card.I will come and collect it, once I receive a positive sign from your end. I am looking forward to your response. yours faithfully Shobha Mallela
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