You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager, in your letter Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months Say how you work could be done while you are away Ask for his or her help in arranging it

Dear
Mr.
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Smith, I am writing to express my interest in working at our company’s headquarters in
Toranto
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Toronto

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, Canada a half
an
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year. I have been here for four years since February 2018, and have covered every aspect of
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Medical

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laboratory testing with almost earnestness.
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, I consider
this
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an opportunity to enhance my knowledge regarding advanced technologies in medical laboratory science.
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, I hope to implement new strategies based on that when I return. All my studies will be covered by Jane, who is working as my assistant. I have trained her thoroughly, and shell
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attending any conferences online and will
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my guidance
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throughout

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through out
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my stay in Canada if any issues
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. I would be grateful if you could make any arrangement necessary for the approval of my request. Kind regards, Nimalka Nwalage.
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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