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Some people believe work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for the different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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It is often argued that it is more beneficial to
work
 throughout their
life
 in
one
 organisation whereas, others claim its much better to keep on changing the workplaces.
This
 essay will discuss both the aspects and my opinion which
supports
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 the
second
 statement.
To begin
 with, many individuals opt to
work
 for
same
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the same
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 companies throughout their lives.
This
 could be due to many reasons
such
 as comfort zone , annual increments or
hike
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a hike
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 in the salary and
work
 satisfaction. It mostly depends upon an
individuals
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individual's
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 perspective and thinking.
For instance
, in
one
 of the surveys in India, it was found that most
of
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the people choose
one
 job entire their lives and specifically in
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government
goverment
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the goverment
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 sector.
One
 of the reasons behind
this
 is the pension policy and health benefits they get at the time of retirement.
On the other hand
, I believe that changing jobs at a particular interval of time is a good choice. It helps to enhance
ones
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one's
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 career growth. Working for different organisations,
accomplishing
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and accomplishing
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 different tasks helps in overall development. Career and
life
becomes
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become
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 stagnant pursuing
same
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the same
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work
.
However
,
sense
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a sense
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 of security is less but on the
counter part
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counterpart
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 chances of
achivements
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achievements
 are more. Nowadays more and more people are opting to
work
 overseas leaving their previous jobs for better family
life
, good perks and most importantly for their personal growth at
work
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the work
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 level. In a nutshell, it depends upon the
individuals
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individual's
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 choice. Some never want to come out of their comfort zone
througout
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throughout
 their career whereas, others want to progress and achieve their desired goals by learning as well as working
at
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in
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 different places and I strongly believe if
one
 wants to gain something in
life
 change is
must
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.
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