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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

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Nowadays learning
English
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 becomes more and more popular among young
people
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. I am convinced that it is extremely essential to learn
English
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 for modern society. In my opinion, it is the
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 of
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 and future days.
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, humankind should not forget about lesser-known local
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. They are
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 and irreplaceable
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 of culture and history.
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 why
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people
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 ought to make effort to prevent the extinction of local
languages
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. It is obvious that
English
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 is a wide-spoken
language
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, so now many
people
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 intend to learn it. I suppose that it is
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 decision and it is a way of communication with the majority of
people
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 all over the world.
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, nowadays it is much easier to find a job with
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 knowledge.
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, a candidate knowing
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 will be more likely to be hired.
Nevertheless
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, survival of local
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 is just as important as knowing
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English
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. Every
language
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 contains its own unusual and special traits, which are
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part
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 of the nation’s culture.
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 of
people
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’s history and knowledge.
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 why I am certain that local
languages
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 should be saved from extinction.
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, some of them have already died out in different parts of the world and now there
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people
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 who remember them. To sum up, learning
languages
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 is substantial for
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modern society. Popular ones like
English
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 are a way of communication with
people
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 from different countries. Unknown local
languages
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 are almost not used nowadays but they are still an essential
part
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 of
culture
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the culture
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 and should be taught in schools.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global communication
  • economic opportunities
  • cultural diversity
  • endangered
  • linguistic heritage
  • inclusive
  • multilingualism
  • language revitalization
  • language policy
  • language preservation
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