Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks like what its contents were

Dear Sir I am writing
this
letter
regarding
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apply

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to
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inquire about my hand luggage which I lost on the plane when I was
traveling
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travelling

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from London to Vancouver. Two days before I came back to Vancouver from London. I booked a ticket
of
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with

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your airline and my Ticket number is BK23456. I just kept
handbag
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my handbag

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along with me while
other
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the other

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luggage is in the luggage compartment. When I reached home , I found that I lost my handbag. I hope you would definitely help me. My bag is small but spacious. It has
red
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a red

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in color

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color
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colour

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with black elastic strips. It has
outer
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an outer

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pocket with
zipper
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a zipper

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and a logo of
it's
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its

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company(Nike)
at
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on

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the front.
This
bag is really important to me as it has my wallet as well as my returning ticket. Some of my documents are in it. I hope you would definitely bring your notice towards
this
matter. I can do whatsoever you would say to follow. Looking forward
for
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your earliest reply. Thanking you in anticipation Yours faithfully Navdeep
kaur
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Kaur

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