Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Having a university degree is considered by some

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the best way to seek

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employment. While other individuals believe that gaining experience and enhancing soft

skills

are more essential. From my point of view, both are indispensable parts

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career

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path. On one hand, it is common knowledge that if people graduate from universities, their job

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will be broadened. The main reason is that completing

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the course

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course

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at university means candidates are already equipped with academic knowledge of their major and have the basics to carry out the work. Indeed, some companies add

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degree as

priority

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requirement

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or even a primary qualification for certain positions. On other hand, good performance of work requires not only

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but

also

experiences

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experience

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and soft

skills

, according to some. In some cases

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positions have a lot of applications, hirers must consider

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many aspects to choose the most suitable candidates. Should employers put aside

qualification

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qualifications

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of education,

experiences

and manner will be the

first

evaluated criteria.

Finally

, in my opinion, working performance is impacted by both

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theoretical

foundation and

experiences

,

soft

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and soft

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skills

.

For instance

, in customer service, basic knowledge helps employees know the taste and traits of

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the customer

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customer

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customers

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.

However

, only by

exposing

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to

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situations of dealing with many types of

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can they deeply understand and analyse

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of customers. In conclusion, I have a very strong belief that nowadays, to get a good job in

this

competitive market, people should make themselves attractive and promising candidates,

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by not only obtaining higher education

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but

also

having more

experiences

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experience

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and improving soft

skills

.