The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The percentage of
people
in a country who owned electronic gadgets and the number
of hours they had been using it
between 1920 and 2019 are depicted in the graphs below. A glance will reveal the fact that the amount of time that has been put Correct pronoun usage
them
in
using electronic devices Change preposition
into
have
decreased despite the Correct subject-verb agreement
has
raise
in the Correct your spelling
rise
number
of owners of refrigerators, washing machines and vacuum cleaners.
In 1920 the number
40 percent
of the Change the spelling
per cent
people
owned a washing machine when almost no one had a refrigerator. But the percentage rose for both groups, while
the rise in the percent
of Replace the word
percentage
people
was small,
about 30 Remove the comma
apply
percent
, it grew sharply to 90 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 40 years. From 1960 to 1980 the trend changed. By 1980, the trend changed for the washing machine and the rise gave way to a fall of almost ten Change the spelling
per cent
percent
which was followed by a gradual rise that did not surpass about 75 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
till 2019. Change the spelling
per cent
On The other hand
, the number
of people
with a refrigerator reached its peak of 100 percent
slightly and remained stable till 2019. The percentage of Change the spelling
per cent
people
with a vacuum cleaner, which had risen 70 percent
steadily in 80 years, meets the line of Change the spelling
per cent
Add an article
the refrigerator
a refrigerator
refrigerator
in 2000 and follows the same pattern afterwards.
Despite the growing trend in all these three appliances, the Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
number
of hours each family uses the
electronic gadgets went down during Correct article usage
apply
this
time. Although
the change is radical in the first 40 years it follows a small decrease till 2019.Submitted by TUTOO on
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