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Many people today are worried about y oung chi ldren using v ideo games. What problems might these games cause, for chi ldren and society as a whole? How could these problems be reduced?

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Introduction
Nowsaday
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Nowadays
, a high number of people is concerned about
youth-children's
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youth children's
 behaviour
playing
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 video games. Since
this
leizure
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leisure
 activity could be easily approached, unsurprisingly, ones are get addicted in intense ways.
Moreover
, some
game
contents
 seem to be
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aggressive
.
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 these reasons, unsatisfied attributes are expressed towards society and
then
, lead to
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crucial and various problems. As the variety of problems from playing
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game
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games
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, there are several results following those intense behaviours.
Firstly
, those young people might copy some
agressive
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aggressive
contents
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 from the video
game
 and the
immplentment
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implement
 in
real-life
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real life
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;
for instance
, in the past year ago, there was
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 relating to teenagers copying the characteristic of
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 character ,who was mafia in the city.
Secondly
, because of its approachable characteristics, they tend to lose
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plenty of
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 during the day. Even though the problems sound
terible
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terrible
, there are methodologies to get along with those issues. Stating the
first
 problem corresponding to
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contents
, the
goverment
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government
 could issue a measure in order to draw the border of infinite
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 of
contents
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.
Moreover
, there should have fines
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 an
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inappropriate
 stuff in
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.
Furthermore
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 for the
second
 issue relating to losing a precious resource
such
 as time, parents should carefully supervise at
this
 point because children are sensitive.
those supervisor
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 might understand the reason why they play
this
 a lot and offer some alternative activities with
richy
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 advantages in skill
develpment
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development
.
Although
,
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game
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 is
problem
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a problem
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 maker, it comes along with some fascinating pros.
this
leizure
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leisure
 activity could establish a wild
imaginary
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 and skills like communication, reaction,
problem solving
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 and so on. In conclusion,
video
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a video
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game
 could lead to
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plenty of drawbacks if it was used intensively.
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 the other hand, it was a great thing to enhance development in various types of skill
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