Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays young generations must be learned general
subjects
such
as,
Health systems, politics, current affairs, Remove the comma
apply
music
, arts, sports, social
welfare. In fact, teenagers Correct word choice
and social
they
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apply
ought-to
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ought to
be research
as per their choice because it is unavoidable and mandatory. Few people perceive that all institutes’ pupils must Change the verb form
be researched
be researching
be
learn anything as per their wishes. More person’s trust must be explored Unnecessary verb
apply
helpful
syllabuses coming days. Just likeChange preposition
in helpful
,
science and technology. I am in accord with the Remove the comma
apply
first
perspective that in the modern world
schooling general
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in general
subjects
is
unavoidable and there are notable advantages. Change the verb form
are
This
essay would further
expand my thoughts on the same in the ensuing paragraphs.
Firstly
, Modern
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the Modern
world
employment market is very competitive because of
, these days demands Change preposition
apply
is
very less supply is more so Change the verb form
are
young
generation should more talented. Correct article usage
the young
Moreover
, they ought-to
aware Correct your spelling
ought to
multiple
Change preposition
of multiple
subjects
. Especially, politics and current affairs about these topics’ perception
is mandatory. Students discover to understand foremost health care system how to follow best diet plans and eschew alcohol and narcotic, Because, Change noun form
topics
For Example
, nowadays youth’s influence
by media persons and sports figures but few of these consuming narcotics so young people try to imitate the celebrities’ habits Wrong verb form
influenced
Therefore
, must be aware Add the comma(s)
,Therefore
about
pre-eminent health habits
Change the preposition
of
Secondly
, The Whole world
everyone thinking
always financial benefits. Whereas most of the population Wrong verb form
thinks
they
are willing to do anything Correct pronoun usage
apply
for
Change preposition
to
become
Change the verb form
becoming
a
rich. These Days human Correct article usage
apply
being
doesn’t perceive Fix the agreement mistake
beings
about
Non-Violence and Humanity. Teenagers try to learn Change preposition
apply
music
and arts. it will affect to develop calm
and peaceful mind. Add an article
a calm
For instance
one of my friend
, Change to a plural noun
friends
he
was Correct pronoun usage
apply
criminal
before Correct article usage
a criminal
unfortunately
he got the opportunity Add a comma
,unfortunately
learning
the Change the verb form
to learn
music
consequently
, it will deviate to change his morality and his body language
To Conclude, new generations learn university subjects
as well as general subjects
also
. Namely known
about Replace the word
knowledge
politics
systems and current affairs is unavoidable. Grasping the best healthcare systems and habits Replace the word
political
it
will help to make Correct pronoun usage
apply
strong
generation. Correct article usage
a strong
Music
and art is always beautiful rhythm in the entire world
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