Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter: • suggest how you could help her in her home • say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available Begin your letter as follows: Dear …………….,
The abbreviated title Mrs. seems to be punctuated incorrectly. Consider changing the punctuation.
It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that there is an article usage problem here.
The word planing doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
The word planing doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
The indefinite article, an, may be redundant when used with the uncountable noun work in your sentence. Consider removing it.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that inquiry may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite