Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Keeping a balance among the subjects being taught in a school curriculum is difficult

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say the least. While some people are promoting the idea that

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is critical for

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to learn, others consider

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and

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far more important. I am convinced that

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knowing

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brings some advantages to students, focusing on

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is far more vital for pupils to survive in

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world. Those who advocate learning

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have valid points. They usually take the example of well-known historical events like world wars which resulted in years of impoverishment, hunger, and the calamity of

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deaths due to

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of diseases and believe familiarising the younger

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with them can prevent upcoming wars.

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is because by increasing their level of

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awareness

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of

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events, the

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generation

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will not repeat the mistakes their ancestors made. Added to

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is the personal aspect of learning

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which helps individuals realize their

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.

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directly contributes to

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understanding

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rationales behind their cultural beliefs.

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, knowing about the

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behind celebrations like thanksgiving leads to offspring respecting that night and

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it in future.

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means that cultures can prevail and be kept safe. Despite the above,

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and

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have always

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as passports to improve. The modern computerized world privileges society members who are familiar with the most recent updates. The reason for it is the influence of

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all aspects of human life.

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, ones can not find decent jobs unless by

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how to apply for them using technologies like job search engines.

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is an ability that the old

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lacks and by preparing the

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generation

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for it, current students will not encounter difficulties current elderlies are dealing with.

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, the subjects of

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and

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are keys to

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universities' doors. A good example of it is Harvard University

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gives interviews

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these topics.

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, for children to be enrolled in reputed universities and have a

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future, people believe that schools should

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emphasize

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on

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and

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. To sum up, it is noteworthy to bear in mind that different subjects that are being taught can bring benefits to students.

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, I believe that the human dependency on

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and the role

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and

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play in having

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education make these two topics far more important.