An increasing trend is nowadays for young adult to play computer games. Some people say this is a negative development. Discuss and give your opinion.

An increasing trend is nowadays for

young

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adult

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adults

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to play

computer

games

. Some people say

this

is a negative development. Discuss and give your opinion. There is no doubt,

the

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people copy others and buy the latest devices and use more and more model computers or laptops in the contemporary world. Some certain individuals believe that

computer

games

give a detrimental effect

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the person and society. In my opinion, I think,

this

behaviour offers dangerous results to each individual and the nation. On the

first

hand, one serious effect

by

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addicted

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to

computer

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a computer

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game

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games

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is social withdrawal which means they tend to have a distance or a gap between family, people and

the

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society, which leads to unrespect or ignoring activities in the culture or postponed

his

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activities daily living.

For instance

, while playing hours and hours above mentioned single or group

games

which show artificial intelligence, they have a limited period

for

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engaging family valuable time, for going out with friends, for social interaction as a responsible adult. It automatically delays and impossible to fulfil his job responsibilities and family or social needs.

Moreover

, when he is entertaining for

this

a long time, he tries to lock the door in his room to minimize disturbance for his activities from the family. He

also

does not eat

properly

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balanced diet which is important.

Thus

, he unknowingly gets health issues because of decreased physical

exercises

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such

as obesity, fluctuation

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blood pressure, diabetes and cardiac diseases physically and anxiety or depression mentally. Ultimately, the user for excessive

games

on the devices, if he goes to school or university that always might be complained by teachers or institute’s lectures as he will not maintain punctuality and failed to submit assignments the given duration properly, as well as he would receive fever sores in the exams and he has to postpone his continue education with values. It

also

affects

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his siblings

this

his

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action and

parents

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will have to spend more money on a particular child unnecessary.

This

also

develops as a family conflict due to the tiredness

on

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the parents

for

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earning more money to complete family needs and in the

end

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parents get old and

remains

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unhappy families. In conclusion, the person who uses more

computer

games

grows most of the time negative aspects of his life and family members and the society.