Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

The shortage of accommodation led to soaring housing prices, which has increased

people

’s financial pressures. Some

people

reckon that the

government

should be responsible for

this

issue. I partially agree with

this

opinion, but I

also

think

people

can choose to live in a place without

a housing shortages

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a housing shortage

housing shortages

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. It is the

government

’s responsibility to control the housing market and ensure residents have a place to live. At the same time, the

government

can use many methods to boost the housing supply, which

include

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includes

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increasing the house budget, decreasing the auditing processes of the construction plan and encouraging more capital companies to invest in accommodation programs.

As a result

, more houses and condos will be built in the

next

few decades and the issue of housing shortages will be relieved.

In addition

, it is

also

important to examine the status of buyers and punish those real estate speculators.

For example

, in order to earn more profits, foreign investment buyers are likely to buy condos in the downtown of big

cities

, pushing up prices in major urban centres. So the

government

could impose taxes or even make laws to punish those speculators and support

people

who have not owned a house before.

However

,

instead

of staying in the central area of big

cities

,

people

can move to smaller

cities

for affordable houses. It is common knowledge that the

center

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centre

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of the world’s best

cities

attracts a large number of

people

coming to work, which results in soaring housing prices.

However

, with the development of virtual technologies

such

as Zoom and Teams, it is unnecessary for those

white collar

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white-collar

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workers to live in the urban

central

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centers

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. They can move to a smaller city

buy

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and buy

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a house more easily. At the same time, it could

also

relieve the problem of housing shortages in big

cities

. In conclusion, the

government

should take the main responsibility for the housing shortage, because it could increase the housing supply by increasing the housing budget and decreasing the real estate speculators by imposing taxes. At the same time,

people

can

also

move to smaller

cities

with more affordable housing.