These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

In contemporary society, many
people
to choose go aboard for work or
study
. it may cause some advantages and disadvantages in their life. In my opinion, we should recognize the risks if we go to other
countries
, and
this
essay will discuss the same. On the positive side,
first
of all, most young
people
immigrate to different
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countries countries
to
study
that benefit to getting a decent job in the future. There is a win-win for gaining language and
skill
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.
For example
, studying in the hospitality industry, obviously, the hotel management skill is essential during the
study
course.
However
, if we choose to English
countries
study
these courses.
Therefore
, We are able to easy to for
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a job in an international chain hotel. What is more, the other benefit is different
countries
have many diverse cultures that we can explore the history and cultural backgrounds. Moving to consider the negative side, one of the
first
problems of the language barriers is difficult for many overseas students, they have to hard effort to
study
different languages. As the result, many due date assessments it is deeply stressful for them. It would cause some mental health issues,
such
as insomnia or depression. Especially for young
people
, if they could not deal with some solutions, it may lead to some of the suicide results. In conclusion, in the rapid and advanced society, the immigrant is trending in many
countries
, when
people
are willing to go on
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, it may balance their benefits and shortage.
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