Lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance. What problems does this shortage cause? What measures could be taken to overcome these problems?

Water

is an essential element

for

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human life.

However

, in several countries, people do not have access to

freshwater

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.

This

issue

results

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some negative effects, which

needs

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to be resolved immediately,

thus

,

this

essay will discuss the

issue

thoroughly.

Human

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body must be fulfilled

by

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water

approximately 90%,

therefore

lack of

water

will probably cause

in

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human’s

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metabolism.

In addition

, unsafe

water

may contain dangerous particles, these species might generate some diseases

such

as cholera and deadly diarrheal fever. In Africa,

for instance

, it is common to see some kids were died due to waterborne diseases.

Besides

this

, limited access to clean

water

would influence to family, specifically domestic sanitation.

Furthermore

, agriculture,

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of the substantial industries,

which

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needs a considerable amount of

water

for growing crops. When insufficient

water

occurs in

this

field, crop failures will probably come up. Some possible actions may be taken due to

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in

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groundwater.

Firstly

, the government have to make some considerable programmes to stop wastewater and limit

the

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water

usage.

This

programme has to be stricter,

hence

, the decreasing of

water

sources might be blocked for sustainability.

Secondly

,

massive

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campaign

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campaigns

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over

water

awareness should be pushed, when society understands the problems, they will consider how important

this

case

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is. The more group of people

aware

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to

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this

issue

, the more

water

is saved for our future life. To conclude,

water

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crisis is

multinational

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issue

, that will give several

impact

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to

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human

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body system and

also

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agriculture

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process. Thence, it is necessary to give

fully

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attention,

although

solutions might be hard to be applicable. Through

government’s

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regulation and

water

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crisis awareness will be certainly helpful.