Lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance. What problems does this shortage cause? What measures could be taken to overcome these problems?

Water
is an essential element
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human life.
However
, in several countries, people do not have access to
freshwater
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.
This
issue
results
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some negative effects, which
needs
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to be resolved immediately,
thus
,
this
essay will discuss the
issue
thoroughly.
Human
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body must be fulfilled
by
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water
approximately 90%,
therefore
lack of
water
will probably cause
in
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human’s
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metabolism.
In addition
, unsafe
water
may contain dangerous particles, these species might generate some diseases
such
as cholera and deadly diarrheal fever. In Africa,
for instance
, it is common to see some kids were died due to waterborne diseases.
Besides
this
, limited access to clean
water
would influence to family, specifically domestic sanitation.
Furthermore
, agriculture,
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of the substantial industries,
which
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needs a considerable amount of
water
for growing crops. When insufficient
water
occurs in
this
field, crop failures will probably come up. Some possible actions may be taken due to
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in
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groundwater.
Firstly
, the government have to make some considerable programmes to stop wastewater and limit
the
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water
usage.
This
programme has to be stricter,
hence
, the decreasing of
water
sources might be blocked for sustainability.
Secondly
,
massive
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campaign
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over
water
awareness should be pushed, when society understands the problems, they will consider how important
this
case
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is. The more group of people
aware
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to
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this
issue
, the more
water
is saved for our future life. To conclude,
water
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crisis is
multinational
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a multinational
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issue
, that will give several
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to
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human
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body system and
also
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agriculture
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process. Thence, it is necessary to give
fully
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attention,
although
solutions might be hard to be applicable. Through
government’s
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regulation and
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crisis awareness will be certainly helpful.
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