Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

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The number of cars on the road has been increasing so far. Due to

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traffic

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problem

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is everywhere. We all know that

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in big cities. Having a

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jam cause a lot of

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in so many

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. At that point,

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governments

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action to discourage

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from using their own var. Having a

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is more convenient for big families. If the

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goverment

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government

designs public transportation

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more convenient for babies and

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, families would prefer to use it more often.

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or some busses do not have enough space for

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wheel chairs

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. As long as

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governments

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do not pay enough

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attention

to these needs,

people

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with babies or

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would not take

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tube

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goverment

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government

control and arrangments and

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design

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government

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private

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car

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is cheaper or almost equal to public

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. Why do

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want to pay more for public

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of their own comfy

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that,

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would get

worsten

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worsen

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and reduce prices.

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car

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would cause more pollution.

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has

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to be educated about harmful gasses which are produced by

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car

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. We wouldn't be able to leave

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and clean

envoirment

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environment

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generation. Seminars, courses,

leflets

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leaflets

or any advertisement would be helpful to teach public how harmful the egsoz

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case,

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government

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involve and

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to educate

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public

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the public

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Discouregment

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has to be supported seriously.

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has to take action every part of

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encouragment

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encouragement

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as reducing public

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coast, designing

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stops or vehicles to help

voulnerable

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vulnerable

people

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educating

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and educating

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people

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to use more often public

transport

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would be the only way how

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beat the

traffic

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problem

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

Fully explain your ideas

The movement of people from agricultural areas to big cities has caused many problems at both places. What are the reasons of this problem and how can it be solved?

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Tourism is a modern form of colonialism. It distorts local economies, causes environmental damage, ruins the places it exploits. To what extent do you agree?