Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work. How far do you agree or disagree with the above view?

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To get a perfect job means one has to finish the duration of
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education
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is a hotly-debated topic that often divides opinion.
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is because it affects everyone’s life. To commence with, it is easier to say “get a better job”.
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, it is not as easy
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to achieve a dream job. So, we have to prepare ourselves both in terms of
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and experiences
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. Job interviews are ubiquitous examples which
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the
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and the most essential step
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an individual’s life.
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is where an intellectual is questioned regarding his/her
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qualifications in terms of academics and any kind of work
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. When it comes to
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era,
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need to acquire higher
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. So that
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entering
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education
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will be more ready, focused and competitive in reality.
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is where they will interpret their strengths and weaknesses theoretically and practically.
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, universities open
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to every person and offer them several departments and
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of study fields.
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,
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poses a great opportunity for
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to master their desired subject.
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, the amount of recruitment has
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increased over the
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few years.
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is why some renowned companies hire or recruit fresh graduates having
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certificate
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on
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bachelor
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degree
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, there might be some
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to starting one’s career early. Though a person’s chosen field is one which does not typically require a
university
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education
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,
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applies to those
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who want to be a home tutor, car mechanic or
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tailor. Though
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type of occupation does not
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gain anything from going to
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. Another concern is having hands-on
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,
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as tutoring, can give an individual a distinct advantage. There was an article about a successful investment broker which I read about
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year. So
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intellectual learned everything he needed to know by working in his chosen field.
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, he could not have achieved
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success by obtaining a
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degree. To conclude,
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education
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should be available and accessible to every human being. So that they can have little problems when they are in the workplace.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • theoretical knowledge
  • critical thinking skills
  • specialized expertise
  • on-the-job training
  • work experience
  • financial independence
  • career growth
  • hands-on experience
  • balanced perspective
  • internships
  • part-time work
  • academic learning
  • vocational training
  • apprenticeships
  • personal circumstances
  • financial constraints
  • career goals
  • individual aptitudes
  • well-paying careers
  • satisfying careers
  • specialized training
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