Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work. How far do you agree or disagree with the above view?
To get a perfect job means one has to finish the duration of
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is a hotly-debated topic that often divides opinion. Linking Words
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is because it affects everyone’s life.
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as
to achieve a dream job. So, we have to prepare ourselves both in terms of Correct word choice
apply
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university
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is where they will interpret their strengths and weaknesses theoretically and practically. Linking Words
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doorsteps
to every person and offer them several departments and Correct pronoun usage
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variety
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people
to master their desired subject. Use synonyms
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is why some renowned companies hire or recruit fresh graduates having Linking Words
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a certificate
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bachelor's
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On the other hand
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benefit
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education
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Therefore
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this
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people
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gain anything from going to Change the adjective
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experiencing
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experience
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last
year. So Linking Words
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intellectual learned everything he needed to know by working in his chosen field. Linking Words
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, he could not have achieved Linking Words
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success by obtaining a Linking Words
university
degree.
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education
should be available and accessible to every human being. So that they can have little problems when they are in the workplace.Use synonyms
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