Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work. How far do you agree or disagree with the above view?

To get a perfect job means one has to finish the duration of

university

education

.

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is a hotly-debated topic that often divides opinion.

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is because it affects everyone’s life. To commence with, it is easier to say “get a better job”.

However

, it is not as easy

as

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to achieve a dream job. So, we have to prepare ourselves both in terms of

education

and experiences

of

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a particular

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subject area

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subject-area

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. Job interviews are ubiquitous examples which

is

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the

first

and the most essential step

for

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an individual’s life.

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is where an intellectual is questioned regarding his/her

last

qualifications in terms of academics and any kind of work

experiences

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experience

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. When it comes to

globalization

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era,

people

need to acquire higher

education

. So that

people

entering

university

education

will be more ready, focused and competitive in reality.

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is where they will interpret their strengths and weaknesses theoretically and practically.

Additionally

, universities open

doorsteps

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to every person and offer them several departments and

variety

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of study fields.

Hence

,

this

poses a great opportunity for

people

to master their desired subject.

For example

, the amount of recruitment has

been

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increased over the

last

few years.

This

is why some renowned companies hire or recruit fresh graduates having

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a certificate

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certificate

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certificates

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on

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bachelor

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bachelor's

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degree

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degrees

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.

On the other hand

, there might be some

benefit

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benefits

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to starting one’s career early. Though a person’s chosen field is one which does not typically require a

university

education

.

Therefore

,

this

applies to those

people

who want to be a home tutor, car mechanic or

boutique’s

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tailor. Though

this

type of occupation does not

necessary

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gain anything from going to

university

. Another concern is having hands-on

experiencing

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experience

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,

such

as tutoring, can give an individual a distinct advantage. There was an article about a successful investment broker which I read about

last

year. So

this

intellectual learned everything he needed to know by working in his chosen field.

As a result

, he could not have achieved

this

success by obtaining a

university

degree. To conclude,

university

education

should be available and accessible to every human being. So that they can have little problems when they are in the workplace.