Many elderly people are no long looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
t is true that nowadays an increasing number of oldsters are not under
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care of their close people but live in Correct article usage
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change in the modern world.
On the one hand, today the community notices several beneficial consequences of this
shift. The first
advantage of this
is that the health of all people in these institutions are
always monitored. Change the verb form
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an
individual
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permanent access to professionally educated doctors and nurses, who could help him any time of the day. Remove the article
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beneficial side for society is that workers who have retired parents are working more efficiently and are able to afford themselves
to relax after a tough day. Correct pronoun usage
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for those whose work requires a great deal of physical labour.
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On the other hand
, the parents and the part of public
whose parents are in Add an article
the public
these kind
of places can face some kinds of mental problems. There is no doubt that people who used to live in a family move out to these institutions they usually feel Change the determiner
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For instance
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that region when one of the residents very strongly missed his daughter and eventually faced dementia.
In conclusion, while there are some plus points of having a free time after work and having a professional treatment if the relationship between child and parent will end after the retirement too much will be lost.Change preposition
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