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These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties.

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Nowadays, more and more
people
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 move to other
countries
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 to study and work. That decision basically brought many benefits to
people
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's lives, but
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 they
also
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 faced many difficulties when living in another
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.
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, deciding to live in another
country
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 is an enriching part of one's life.Many young
people
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 have chosen to study in the UK, USA, France, etc. to be able to connect with the outside world.The reason they choose European and American
countries
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 is
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 English is the main
language
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 of the world.
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, learning and studying in another
country
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 can help us understand more about the culture, religion, cuisine, etc. of those
countries
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.
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, every year thousands of Vietnamese
people
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 choose to study in Japan and Korea.Because these
countries
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 offer many conditions for studying, increasing
language
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 proficiency and easily finding a job when returning home.
On the other hand
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, not being able to easily adapt to the culture in another
country
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 is a big problem.Some
people
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 take a long time to deal with
language
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, climate, and cultural barriers.Learning a new
language
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 is a challenging and difficult process.
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, when living in another
country
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 you need to learn the culture and behave properly in that
country
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.
For example
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, in Thailand, when greeting
people
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, they often clasp their hands in front of their chest and bow politely. But in Singapore, they just shake hands in an informal way
instead
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 of greeting. In short, starting a new life whether in
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one
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country
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 or another
country
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 is never easy. Personally, I think that each of us needs to try to overcome challenges and turn difficulties into motivation.

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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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