The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

Some

people

insist that concrete stores in towns and cities will

diappear

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disappear

in the future as online shopping is rapidly growing.

However

, I disagree with

this

opinion because various shops give us a lot of benefits that we can not experience through online shopping malls.

First

of all, in the case of purchasing clothes, many

people

experience items delivered which are not matched

with

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the photos of them on the product pages of the website.

This

make

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people

need to return or exchange them by requesting to the service department. I believe that there will be no one who

are

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willing to do these steps and wait for the products they need

so

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long.

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the other hand, if

people

go

to shop

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, they are able to inspect products directly with their own two eyes before paying to buy them.

Therefore

, shopping at a store let

people

experience less failure

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their purchasing.

Secondly

, on occasion, some

people

have to buy a certain item urgently to use it right

next

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day.

For example

, it happens often that students have to bring some stuff they need to use in the class and children tend not to prepare it in advance, so usually purchase it the day before. In

this

case, shops in our town help them to be able to prepare things on time. In conclusion, even though online shopping is getting more popular than before, we still need the benefits that are offered by concrete shops as above. For

this

reason, I believe that stores will be existing our society.