The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar charts illustrate the laptop possessors,
firstly
as a percentage
of the population
in general and then
considering
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consider
also
the instruction level, between 2002 and 2010.
The data clearly shows that the amount
of Change the quantifier
number
people
who held a computer
constantly increased every year between 2002 and 2010. In fact, in 2002 less than 60 per cent of the population
owned a computer
. In 2004 the percentage
went up to 60 per cent and then
, it overcame this
value in 2006. Furthermore
, in 2008 the share of the population
who had a computer
was nearly 70%. Finally
, in 2010 the percentage
rejoined the value of 80 per cent.
Similarly
, analysing the population
on the basis of the
education level, the proportion of Correct article usage
apply
people
holding a computer
rose between 2002 and 2010. Indeed, the percentage
of people
without the
high school diploma increased by four times from 2002 to 2010, Correct article usage
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whereas
the percentage
of people
with the
high school graduation went up to 70% in 2010 Correct article usage
a
while
it was only near
40% in 2002. Change the word
nearly
Finally
, for people
with a bachelor's degree or with a postgraduate qualification, the increase of
the Change preposition
in
percentage
was about 20% between 2002 and 2010.
Overall
, the bar charts demonstrate how the number of computer
owners significantly increased between 2002 and 2010. This
conclusion is evident from both the analysis of the population
in general and the study of people
considering their instruction level.Submitted by lucabertoni7 on
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