The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar charts illustrate the laptop possessors,
firstly
as a Linking Words
percentage
of the Use synonyms
population
in general and Use synonyms
then
Linking Words
considering
Change the form of the verb
consider
also
the instruction level, between 2002 and 2010.
The data clearly shows that the Linking Words
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
people
who held a Use synonyms
computer
constantly increased every year between 2002 and 2010. In fact, in 2002 less than 60 per cent of the Use synonyms
population
owned a Use synonyms
computer
. In 2004 the Use synonyms
percentage
went up to 60 per cent and Use synonyms
then
, it overcame Linking Words
this
value in 2006. Linking Words
Furthermore
, in 2008 the share of the Linking Words
population
who had a Use synonyms
computer
was nearly 70%. Use synonyms
Finally
, in 2010 the Linking Words
percentage
rejoined the value of 80 per cent.
Use synonyms
Similarly
, analysing the Linking Words
population
on the basis of Use synonyms
the
education level, the proportion of Correct article usage
apply
people
holding a Use synonyms
computer
rose between 2002 and 2010. Indeed, the Use synonyms
percentage
of Use synonyms
people
without Use synonyms
the
high school diploma increased by four times from 2002 to 2010, Correct article usage
a
whereas
the Linking Words
percentage
of Use synonyms
people
with Use synonyms
the
high school graduation went up to 70% in 2010 Correct article usage
a
while
it was only Linking Words
near
40% in 2002. Change the word
nearly
Finally
, for Linking Words
people
with a bachelor's degree or with a postgraduate qualification, the increase Use synonyms
of
the Change preposition
in
percentage
was about 20% between 2002 and 2010.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the bar charts demonstrate how the number of Linking Words
computer
owners significantly increased between 2002 and 2010. Use synonyms
This
conclusion is evident from both the analysis of the Linking Words
population
in general and the study of Use synonyms
people
considering their instruction level.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, population, people, computer with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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