Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter: • suggest how you could help her in her home • say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mr Barrett, I am writing

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letter with regards to the advertisement that you advertised in the Dawn newspaper on 23rd Feb 2021, that you need someone to help you for a little time during a day in your home

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, I could help you with the furniture move that you are finding heavier to move it from one place to another ,

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I love to cook a delicious meal so I could cook different dishes which you never tasted before,

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I can give my helping hand to clean your apartment Let me explain to you why I need

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job. ,

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I am studying at Concordia university doing a master's in an IT field and

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engaged in part-time work in a restaurant, the salary that I am getting from the restaurant is not enough for me to pay my tuition fee for the summer semester so if I got

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job

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it would be beneficial for me to earn more money in order to pay my summer semester fee because I don't want to make money from my parents, I hope you understand my situation I am available from Monday to Sunday afternoon from 2pm to 9pm. In the morning I am available because at

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time I am doing a part-time work Please consider me for

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opportunity, I look forward to hearing from you Your's Sincerely Zaid

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

234 words

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