Some said that students should study in group. Others said that it is better to study alone. Discuss both views

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Some
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like studying with their friends, others like studying alone. While others said that they should
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alone, I would argue that they should
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with other friends. On the one hand, some
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like studying alone,
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may help them learn independent skills.
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, if they stay alone to
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, they will have a quiet space.
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helps them focus on their homework and they do not need anyone to help.
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, they might have a better
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result.
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,
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studying alone might help them be more proactive in their lives. Because they do their homework by themself, they need to find information and solve problems
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their subject by themself.
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, many people think that
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studying in
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have more benefits.
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,
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studying in
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may help them improve teamwork skills and
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is very necessary to have good job opportunities in the future.
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, when my friend was a university student, she often studied with her small
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. If they had any difficult problems, they would find solutions and solve them together.
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, they helped every member
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the group to
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better.
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, their group was always
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her class. After graduation, she worked in a famous company, because she always was the best salesperson in her group and she helped her colleagues a lot , she was promoted to sales manager.
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,
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studying in
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may solve the problems quickly.
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, if teachers give difficult homework, a student may need much time to find the answers.
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, if they
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with other
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, they might very quickly find not only one answer
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answers. While it is true that
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studying alone are good for them, I believe that studying in
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is the better option.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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