More and more people are working from home rather than at the workforce. Some people say this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but others think it will bring stress to the home. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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