More and more people are working from home rather than at the workforce. Some people say this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but others think it will bring stress to the home. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
At the moment we are facing the covid-19 pandemic in the world because of the coronavirus every country implementing a sticky lockdown. It’s caused the shutdown of all the companies, schools, institutions and research centres. Nowadays many companies and research institutions allow
people
to work
from home
but some communities happily accept jobs from home
and others’s not. If people
do work
from home
it will benefit for few people
but another reason is many people
is facing the problem like mental unstable, family issues, husband-wife fighting other hand some people
like that because they have time for family and they can work
extra part-time work
with other company earn more money. Right now many people
pursuing additional courses, so other activities they are learning. They love to work
any time of instead
watching tv, and chill with friends any time. As a result
, a person feels comfortable and becomes more concentrated on his responsibilities. In conclusion, however
arguments above in support of each opinion, we can see there are many advantages and disadvantages of being employed from home
and I want to say that it must be decided by everybody which way of employment to choose.Submitted by nagendranp1991 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite