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Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Tax
 payment for
education
 is a controversial topic whether the parents, who pay exorbitant money for their children to attain private
school’s
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 facilities, should still pay taxes relating to
education
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 system. While some
people
 think they are able to afford the payment for private teaching schools, they can avoid taxing. I completely disagree with
this
 statement and
this
 essay will examine the reasons why. To offer an exception of
tax
 payment to
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individual
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 for a specific reason or each person’s situation would produce a
further
 problem
to
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 the
governments
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. If parents
who
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can attend their children to private schools and ask for a
tax
 reduction for
education
,
tax
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 calculation for each individual would be a complex process and results in a burden to the government.
In addition
, other
people
 who are not provided
a
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certain kind of public services would acquire
for
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the same implementation. As a
consequences
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, the government’s income is diminished from the circumstance.
Moreover
, another detrimental effect
from
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 allowing the rich
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reduction
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 of
tax
 is that
tax
 collection from rich
people
 will be decreased,
in contrast
, poor communities are required to pay higher taxes due to the more public facilities they use.
This
 will result in
the
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 wider gap between the rich and the poor, and
education
 will be accessible
only
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some
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people
 who have enough to pay
for
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the
tax
. In conclusion, while there
are
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 someone who thinks they should not pay for the public services they do not get, in my opinion, I believe everyone should have the same opportunity
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an
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access to
the
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education
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • tax exemption
  • public education
  • private schools
  • collective responsibility
  • societal welfare
  • equitable access
  • financial burden
  • social cohesion
  • tax credits
  • vouchers
  • subsidies
  • state-funded
  • socioeconomic disparities
  • public vs. private sector
  • quality of education
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