When choosing a job the salary most important consideration. Do you agree?

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these

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present world, finding a lucrative

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and breaking into the market

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important

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around the globe.

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occupation is a crucial thing considered by

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seekers when

choose

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it. I am not convinced that the salary can be the most significant item to choose

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. There is

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argument in

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of income

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the most crucial thing regarding landing

career

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.

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and foremost,

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salary can

fulfill

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people’s requirements. simply put, one of the most important

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of

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getting a

job

is definitely making money and meeting needs in order to acquire

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,

hence

employee

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employees

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often tend to land

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job

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with generous benefits rather than finding

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. Take the graduates in less developed countries as an example, they have been seeking for well-

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occupation which is unrelated to their degree because the salary is the most important consideration. As a consequence,

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the well-powered

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job

would lead people to get more convenience and

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in their life.

However

, opponents argue against it for several reasons.

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,

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satisfaction can be a vital item about choosing

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.

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, employees involved in

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work load

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cannot continue their careers due to the fact that it often takes a lot of stamina. As a consequence, considering

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satisfaction is the main point to select

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.

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, another reason would be

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a good career prospect. The vast majority of

job

seekers apparently tend to get a

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including a good outlook so that they can progress. There are constant stories about workers who would rather get

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and make a name for themselves than

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a raise. In conclusion,

although

a

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earning huge amount of money is

an

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important,

a

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satisfaction and a good career outlook will seemingly be the most significant item in terms of the selection occupation.