The pie charts below compare the proportion of energy capacity in gigawatts (GW) in 2015 with the predictions for 2040.

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The graph illustrates the comparison of the

energy

capacity

between 2015 and 2040.

Overall

energy

from fossil fuels and other renewables will be decreased from 2015 to 2040. The number of wind and solar

energy

will have risen throughout the

years

However

, nuclear

energy

will be levelled out. Total

energy

capacity

will increase over the

years

Firstly

, fossil fuel

capacity

will be dropped between 2015 and 2040 (%64, and 44 respectively).

Secondly

, other renewable

energy

will have fallen from 2015 to 2040 (%23, and 21 respectively).

Thirdly

, total

energy

capacity

will have

been

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increased throughout the

years

(6688 GW,

11678

Correct word choice

and 11678

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GW, respectively) Wind

energy

will have ascended over the

years

(%5 and 12, respectively).

Energy

from

the

Correct article usage

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solar resources will have risen exactly nine-fold from 2015 to 2040 (%18 and 2, respectively).

However

, the amount of nuclear

energy

will

Unnecessary verb

apply

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roughly

remained

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remain

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steady between 2015 and 2040 (%6 and 5, respectively)

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

151 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The pie charts below compare the proportion of energy capacity in gigawatts (GW) in 2015 with the predictions for 2040.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Many believe that it is important to protect all wild animals, while others think that it is important to protect some, not all of them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is a commonly held belief that the death penalty is a good deterrent to prevent heinous crimes. However, others believe that life long sentence is a better deterrent. Discuss both views

Government investment in the arts,such as music and theatre is a waste of money. Government must invest this money in public service instead. Do you agree or disagree.

Many small businesses are being forced to close because they cannot compete with multinational corporations. What problems does this cause, and how can those problems be solved?

Write a letter to a friend who will come to your country to work for 6 months. In your letter, you should: •recommend a city •suggest a few jobs that your friend could do •give some opinions about making friends with the locals.