The pie charts below compare the proportion of energy capacity in gigawatts (GW) in 2015 with the predictions for 2040.
The graph illustrates the comparison of the
energy
capacity
between 2015 and 2040.
Overall
, energy
from fossil fuels and other renewables will be decreased from 2015 to 2040. The number of wind and solar energy
will have risen throughout the years
. However
, nuclear energy
will be levelled out. Total energy
capacity
will increase over the years
.
Firstly
, fossil fuel capacity
will be dropped between 2015 and 2040 (%64, and 44 respectively). Secondly
, other renewable energy
will have fallen from 2015 to 2040 (%23, and 21 respectively). Thirdly
, total energy
capacity
will have been
increased throughout the Unnecessary verb
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years
(6688 GW, 11678
GW, respectively)
Wind Correct word choice
and 11678
energy
will have ascended over the years
(%5 and 12, respectively). Energy
from the
solar resources will have risen exactly nine-fold from 2015 to 2040 (%18 and 2, respectively). Correct article usage
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However
, the amount of nuclear energy
will be
roughly Unnecessary verb
apply
remained
steady between 2015 and 2040 (%6 and 5, respectively)Wrong verb form
remain
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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