You recently organised an all- day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, - Say what the participants liked about the hotel - Explain why they were unhappy about the food - Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future

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Dear Manager, I am Lakshmi manager of Apple company and I am writing to you to provide our feedback on your service which was held on
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Sunday evening at 5PM in the ballroom. My team enjoyed your great advanced furniture set up along with the smooth reception area and especially push back seating chairs were really awesome. During
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the team was expected to have nice and tasty
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unfortunately they were not happy with served
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along with the snacks as well.
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, one of the vegan items was not cooked properly and they even noticed some stones on their lunch plate which was horrible to the entire team. As we want to continue our business relations in future
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, we would like to see a good amount of changes in
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menu and if possible please replace the master chef with expert one. It would be good if you can check the
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quality before serving to your customers and that will enable you to ensure that serving quality. I look forward to hearing from you with a recent update to the
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menu. Yours faithfully, Lakshmi.
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