Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use spec reasons and examples to support your answer.

Honestly, I love both affirmations, which have pros and cons. Personally, I am a
home
lover so my choice is easily you can reckon. On the
one
hand, I would like to point out my two arguments on eating out: eating out costs more money and is less hygienic. I have some support for the statement of eating out because it offers some merits. Let me explain
this
. At upscale restaurants, musicians are recruited to entertain the consumers who are coming to relieve their stress and boost their energy with different kinds of musical instruments. We all know that music can heal our uncured suffering in the most effective ways. The modernised restaurants’ highly satisfactory appeals
such
as music, indoor games, numerous kinds of
food
and so forth are the most welcoming features to the people. Those are willing to spend money for the sake of their relaxing time with the best offers. The disadvantage of it is that we can only get preserved
food
. What I mean is that all meat, fish and perishable foodstuffs are kept in refrigerated cabinets
with
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different temperatures and may have some chemicals in them to be long lasting which is extremely damaging to our health. I, personally, don’t concur 100% with the ordering of foods at the
food
stands because I have a contention that my lack of interest in fast
food
is particularly from it.
On the other hand
, I prefer
home-made
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food
, not only hygienic and healthy but
also
it offers a host of merits. As we all know, meat is rich in protein and fish is a low-fat
high quality
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protein and it has
a great deal of
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a lot of
many
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minerals
such
as potassium, iodine, calcium and so forth. But
one
thing is that they have to be fresh. That’s the underlying factor why I prefer
home
cooking. Shopping for fresh foodstuffs in markets is my fussy habit and I have sharp eyes to see which
food
is fresh,
which
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is not.
One
table for two people at the restaurant is equal to
one
dining table for five or more people at
home
. It’s not slightly different but highly different in cost between them. The foods can be prepared as if we want to be that we like to add curry powder to get
more
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chilly colour or strong sweet smell in meat curry or whatever you want. Cleaning very well is my
first
priority
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the cooking menu. There is a truth we all don’t like is that cleaning up after cooking is really really frustrating. To sum up,
although
there is a dominating trend towards eating out, I prefer traditional
home
cooking.
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