More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Over the
last
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decade, the number of individuals migrating to urban areas for a better
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are drastically increased. The basic needs to live
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life
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in
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places should be provided by the authorities. In
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places, some citizens face certain challenges with the housing facilities and
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jams;
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, I provide my solutions for
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issues to governments.
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with, no one can deny that
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city
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comes with many consequences.
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and foremost, Due to urbanization, many individuals do not have proper basic accommodation
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is because the demand for houses
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gradually increased due to migrations from rural areas.
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, When I was moved to the Toronto city from a small village it was tough to find an
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apartment
within my budget
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and ended up
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sharing
accommodiation
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accommodation
with others.
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, in
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places driving to the workplace on time is not possible due to the
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jams, especially for the new people driving is really tuff.
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, I always start two hours early to my work to ensure I reach the office safely and on time. Be that as it may, municipalities should implement the below solutions for the problems
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mentioned above.
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, to resolve
housing
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the housing
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issue, authorities should construct new
appartments
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apartments
which will reduce the demand, and supply
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more houses for everyone.
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, to address
traffic
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issue
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, the roadways department must build flyovers and improve public transport to reduce the number of cars.
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, I commute to
office
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the office
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everyday
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in my own vehicle as I do not have access to public
transportion
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transportation
from my source to
destination
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my destination
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.
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, to recapitulate, many people have been migrating to cities for
better
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life
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but unfortunately during their initial
phase
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they struggle to survive due to
lack
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a lack
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of facilities and new
to
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traffic
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.
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, I have provided some solutions that
to
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are to
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be implemented by the governments to give
better
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a better
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life
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for the public.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urbanization
  • Metropolis
  • Rapid urban growth
  • Megacity
  • Urban sprawl
  • Housing affordability
  • Infrastructure development
  • Public transportation
  • Traffic congestion
  • Pollution
  • Noise pollution
  • Green spaces
  • Job market
  • Social cohesion
  • Community engagement
  • Safety measures
  • Crime prevention
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