More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Over the
last
decade, the number of individuals migrating to urban areas for a better life
are drastically increased. The basic needs to live the
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life
in such
places should be provided by the authorities. In such
places, some citizens face certain challenges with the housing facilities and traffic
jams; however
, I provide my solutions for such
issues to governments.
To begin
with, no one can deny that the
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life
comes with many consequences. First
and foremost, Due to urbanization, many individuals do not have proper basic accommodation this
is because the demand for houses are
gradually increased due to migrations from rural areas. Change the verb form
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For Instance
, When I was moved to the Toronto city from a small village it was tough to find an appartment
within my budgetCorrect your spelling
apartment
,
and ended up Remove the comma
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with
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accommodiation
with others. Correct your spelling
accommodation
In addition
, in such
places driving to the workplace on time is not possible due to the traffic
jams, especially for the new people driving is really tuff. For example
, I always start two hours early to my work to ensure I reach the office safely and on time.
Be that as it may, municipalities should implement the below solutions for the problems that
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Firstly
, to resolve housing
issue, authorities should construct new Correct article usage
the housing
appartments
which will reduce the demand, and supply Correct your spelling
apartments
the
more houses for everyone. Correct article usage
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Secondly
, to address traffic
issue
, the roadways department must build flyovers and improve public transport to reduce the number of cars. Fix the agreement mistake
issues
For example
, I commute to office
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the office
everyday
in my own vehicle as I do not have access to public Replace the word
every day
transportion
from my source to Correct your spelling
transportation
destination
.
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my destination
Finally
, to recapitulate, many people have been migrating to cities for better
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a better
life
but unfortunately during their initial phase
they struggle to survive due to Add a comma
,phase
lack
of facilities and new Correct article usage
a lack
to
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traffic
. However
, I have provided some solutions that to
be implemented by the governments to give Add a missing verb
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