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You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter describe the item explain where and when you left it say what action you would like the company to take

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Dear Sir or Madam, I lost my laptop on a train. It was a MacBook Pro grey colour. Top-secret documents from the UK Military agency were saved on HDD
this
 computer because you can recognise it by a large label with the text "TOP SECRET".
This
 item is very important to me, my mother presented it on my birthday. I went from London to Bristol on the morning train and was sitting
next
 to the window at place 10, carriage 5. I think I left the laptop when my station was announced and I was hurrying to the city. Would you be kind enough to look for my notebook computer? I can assume that the train conductor could see my computer. I strongly advise you to ask him. If he doesn't know you can ask the employee at the Bristol railway station. If you find my laptop, please call or text me. Best regards, Vladimir Chilikov
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • valuable
  • distinguishing features
  • route
  • carriage
  • seat number
  • lost and found department
  • appropriate steps
  • contact information
  • swift and positive action
  • item of value
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