In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

In some countries ,governments are
incouraging
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encouraging
idustries
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industries
and
businesses
to move to the spacial places which
is
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far from
people
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life.
Although
this
essue
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issue
can have many
advantages
,it may bring some drawbacks as well. The important
advantages
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is that big
cities
will be without air pollution If the
factories
move spacial areas and
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outside of
cities
.
There
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These
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businesses
and industries produce too much dangerous smoke so If these
factories
be
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outside of
cities
,
this
smoke will not enter the
cities
. The reason is that air pollution is one of
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problems in modern big societies.The governments can solve
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problem
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this
way. The
second
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is that traffic jams can be less than before with
this
decision.The reason is that
factories
vehicles will have
diffrent
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different
way for commuting so people can save
time
when there
is
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no traffic jams.
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the
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result
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this
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method
can have a lot of benefits for governments
such
as saving
time
.
On the other hand
,
build
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spacial
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which
have
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many facilities need too much cost for
businesses
and industries . They have to pay too much money for
this
plan and it may
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affect
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effect
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affect
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on
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their business. Another negative point is that
businesses
will be many far from big
cities
so they have to spend
many
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time
for
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transfering
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transferring
.
Also
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they need to have more vehicles and
staffs
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staff
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. To sum up,there can be a lot of
advantages
in moving
factories
in spacial
airas
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areas
which is far from big
cities
.
For example
:
this
methood
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method
will be
affective
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on
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in
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decline
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the decline
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traffic
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in traffic
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jams and big
cities
will have
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sky
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without air pollution . While it has many disadvantages
such
as spending much
time
for
transfering
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transferring
and having more vehicles and staff.
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