You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter describe the item explain where and when you left it say what action you would like the company to take

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Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that yesterday May 22, 2022, I was travelling by your train from my hometown to Bolton. It was 2 hours journey and I took the train around 2 pm and got off around 4 pm. Once I checked, I came to know that my hand band was not with me. Actually, my

handbagbag

Correct your spelling

handbag bag

is brown in colour. It is about 45 centimetres long and wide. There are 4 chains in my

bag

and attached a key with them. I have put a lot of stuff in my bags

such

as my cosmetics, my tickets and my exam notes. Apart from that I

also

have put some money into it. Since I was the only single person in my seat so I decided to leave my

bag

and I went to the washroom. But, when I returned back, I was shocked to see that the

bag

was not there. I think the company should be responsible for finding my

bag

and they must check the CCTV Cameras at their earliest convenience. It would be great if you could help me to find my handbag. I hope to listen from you soon. Yours faithfully, Sandeep Kaur

Submitted by kaursandeep79561 on Wed May 25 2022

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