You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter describe the item explain where and when you left it say what action you would like the company to take

Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing

this

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letter to inform you that yesterday May 22, 2022, I was travelling by your train from my hometown to Bolton. It was 2 hours journey and I took the train around 2 pm and got off around 4 pm. Once I checked, I came to know that my hand band was not with me. Actually, my

handbagbag

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handbag bag

is brown in colour. It is about 45 centimetres long and wide. There are 4 chains in my

bag

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and attached a key with them. I have put a lot of stuff in my bags

such

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as my cosmetics, my tickets and my exam notes. Apart from that I

also

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have put some money into it. Since I was the only single person in my seat so I decided to leave my

bag

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and I went to the washroom. But, when I returned back, I was shocked to see that the

bag

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was not there. I think the company should be responsible for finding my

bag

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and they must check the CCTV Cameras at their earliest convenience. It would be great if you could help me to find my handbag. I hope to listen from you soon. Yours faithfully, Sandeep Kaur

kaursandeep79561

May 25, 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

205 words

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swift and positive action
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