Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In
this
contemporary world, education is a vital key factor in human life
. Moreover
, some people believe that adolescents should want to study whatever their desire subjects for their higher education , whearas
others declare that they should only Correct your spelling
whereas
allowed
their children to do science and Change the verb form
be allowed
allow
technological
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technology
courses
which will be useful in their future. This
essay will focus on these views and eventually, I will elaborate on my opinion too.
To begin
with, wherever youngsters are trying to science and technological learnings in their schools because to obtain high
range of salary to maintain their future Add an article
a high
the high
life
. For example
, in 2000, an indian
survey shows that 80% of school adolescents had chosen under their family Change the capitalization
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desires
to do.mechanical subjects for their secondary education. Wrong verb form
desired
As a result
, parents are able to allow their offsprings
to do these Fix the agreement mistake
offspring
courses
and children are trying to achieve educational qualifications in technological
stream with their parents' guide to fulfil their future Add an article
the technological
a technological
prosperous
.
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prosperity
On the other hand
, some elders are able to give liberty for
their Change preposition
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child
, to do higher studies under the child's aspire. Fix the agreement mistake
children
In addition
, they believe that when youths are allowed to choose their educational platforms with their own aspects, try to get best
results because they have Correct article usage
the best
a
capability to achieve without any other distracts like parents8or teacher's impact on them. Correct article usage
the
For instance
, students attempted to choose their university degrees by themselves rather than given more concerned about high demand courses
. Consequently
, they are able to do learnings
in Fix the agreement mistake
learning
products
way without any other pressures and they attain to get mental relaxation rather than other fears to do Fix the agreement mistake
product
such
difficult learnings.
In conclusion, from my perspective, currently, technology has becoming
a major part of Wrong verb form
become
human's
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human
life
and without it, week
not able to do activities in our daily routines. Even though younger people are Add an article
a week
guides
to choose these Wrong verb form
guided
science related
studies by adults because Add a hyphen
science-related
definitely
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,definitely
this
will help to get wide
range of carrier opportunities and better Add an article
a wide
life
. If children obtain their own desire
subjects most of the time they get easy Wrong verb form
desired
courses
, they will struggle to get workand
hard to live in the modern society.Correct your spelling
work and
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