You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: - explain why you were at the restaurant - describe the problems - write about the action you want the manager to take

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

Dear Sir, I am writing

this

Linking Words

letter to show my disappointment with the services of your renowned restaurant Sera Classic at William Street Road where I had visited with my family

Change preposition

apply

show examples

last

Linking Words

Sunday. At the onset, I was there with my family and some of my close relatives because it was my birthday so my family planned

for

Change preposition

show examples

dine

Change the verb form

dining

show examples

out.

However

Linking Words

, we all faced a lot of problems with the meal. Primarily, two dishes, Chicken Curry and Chicken with Gravy

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

were having a bad smell probably because the meat was not fresh.

Moreover

Linking Words

, the chicken pieces were not soft enough to eat and ultimately we all were totally annoyed with the meal as these two were the main dishes of our meal.

Lastly

Linking Words

, I want you to look at the seriousness of

this

Linking Words

issue personally lest it should harm the goodwill of your restaurant among customers. If you find out the person behind

this

Linking Words

negligence and terminate his services immediately, it will be a good solution for

this

Linking Words

issue.

In addition

Linking Words

, kindly supervise the supply of fresh meat at your restaurant so that customers can get fresh meat in their dishes which will be really admirable. Look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Harry Brown

Mrjit147Thu May 26 2022

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

6
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

208 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

7
band
Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
People have different views about the primary reasons for environmental issues throughout the world. Some consider the extinction of specific breeds of plants and animals to be the main cause of the problem, while others including me believe that other concerns are more prior.
8
band
It is more important for a building to be functional than beautiful. Architects should not worry about designing buildings as works of art. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Some people argue that establishments should be more beautiful than functional. However, my view of this issue is that buildings should be constructed functionally, especially, on the point of safety first, and then need to be beautiful for people’s mental as well.
7
band
Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, some governments try to escalate the number of their achievements in the sports sphere by building up international sports centres for top athletes, while society argues about that idea as it wants to have more multisport sports centres. In my essay, I talk about each part of the benefits of investing in the government in each sphere.
7.5
band
You are planning a business trip to another city. You will have some free time to do some sightseeing while you are there. ● Write a letter to a friend who lives in the city you will visit. In your letter ● Explain the purpose of the trip ● Ask about thing to do and see in the city ● Invite your friend to do something with you during your visit
I am writing to you to let you know about my plans and ask for your recommendations because I'm visiting London next Monday.
8.5
band
You recently visited a tourist attraction in another city. Write a letter to a friend describing your experience. In your letter: Describe the tourist attraction you visited. Explain why you chose to visit it. Share your impressions and experiences. Invite your friend to visit the attraction with you in the future.
I hope this letter finds you well. I am sharing my recent experience at the Omaha City Zoo with you.

Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

It is more important for a building to be functional than beautiful. Architects should not worry about designing buildings as works of art. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.