Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

These days some people place a premium on learning a new
language
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the reason why they do
this
is in order to travel or work in another country, while other argue that, they have other reasons for knowing a foreign
language
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there are other compelling reasons. To advance a convincing theory I could deal with, the extinction of a
language
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had about 1000 languages. But now we only have about 560. Almost half of the languages have been extinct.
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to what I have just said, gone is the idea of knowing 1
language
. owing to the advent of state-of-the-art technology, so as to know how to work with you should know the most
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common
language
in the world which is English. On top of
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it is a way of communication, if you want to talk to people from overseas, you need to know another
language
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for example
, I myself know 3 other languages
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my mother tongue. They have helped me a lot in different situations.
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way of talking has different prepuces, for many human beings, its main reason is for immigration or
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For instance
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and participate in a university there,
this
is the root cause I’m studying English really hard these days.
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offline. To conclude, there are different factors for learning new things. We all have different goals.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • thirdly
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  • moreover
  • also
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  • therefore
  • however
  • although
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  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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