The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where revelant.
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students
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students
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studied Use synonyms
further
when they graduated and it is the most common thing. Linking Words
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the
number of 17735 Correct article usage
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students
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, 16235 of them didn't get any job and only 3500 Linking Words
students
were in voluntary jobs.
Turning to the Use synonyms
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chart of postgraduate Linking Words
students
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students
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postgraduate
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was also
with
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students
and 1625 people got Use synonyms
umemployment
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unemployment
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students
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