Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
With the innovation of smartphones, tablets
or
other apple products. social media is affected a lot of Correct word choice
and
people
's daily life
. It makes
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takes
people
focus on hobbles every day. In the following paragraph, I will explain the effect this
has on individuals and society
in general.
Technology makes people
know a lot of information from social media or television and hard to avoid receiving news
. following that, It Add an article
the news
effects
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affects
people
who have mental stress every time
.For example
, information such
as what is happening in their friend’s life
, or their neighbour’s life
, eventually leads to comparison and insecurity. People
are getting dissatisfied with whatever they have and spending time
more on work to earn more and less on their hobbies. A report from Bloomberg shows that around 98% of adults spend around 50% of their time
on the internet and social media looking for what is happening in another person’s life
.
This
information exposure is affecting the individual mental and physical health
badly, which is thus
affecting society
. As people
are not satisfied, they are becoming more insecure and stressed. Stress can affect one’s mental health
and physical health
which leads to unfriendly behaviour in society
and bad relationships with their peers. Sometimes in extreme cases
it can lead to criminal activities Add a comma
,cases
also
as we have seen these days because of various insecurities people
are involved in mass shootings and killings.
In conclusion, spending time
on hobbies is important for one mental and physical health
. One can get connected with the inner self by devoting time
to hobbies, leading to good mental and physical health
as a result
of which one can contribute to society
in a more beneficial way.Submitted by first.kantapat on
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