Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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With the innovation of smartphones, tablets
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other apple products. social media is affected a lot of
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's daily
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only a few
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focus on hobbles every day. In the following paragraph, I will explain the effect
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has on individuals and
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in general. Technology makes
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know a lot of information from social media or television and hard to avoid receiving
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. following that, It
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people
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who have mental stress every
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, information
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as what is happening in their friend’s
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, or their neighbour’s
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, eventually leads to comparison and insecurity.
People
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are getting dissatisfied with whatever they have and spending
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more on work to earn more and less on their hobbies. A report from Bloomberg shows that around 98% of adults spend around 50% of their
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on the internet and social media looking for what is happening in another person’s
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.
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information exposure is affecting the individual mental and physical
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badly, which is
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affecting
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. As
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are not satisfied, they are becoming more insecure and stressed. Stress can affect one’s mental
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and physical
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which leads to unfriendly behaviour in
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and bad relationships with their peers. Sometimes in extreme
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it can lead to criminal activities
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as we have seen these days because of various insecurities
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are involved in mass shootings and killings. In conclusion, spending
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on hobbies is important for one mental and physical
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. One can get connected with the inner self by devoting
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to hobbies, leading to good mental and physical
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as a result
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of which one can contribute to
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in a more beneficial way.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Devote time
  • Hobbies
  • Nowadays
  • Busy
  • Fast-paced
  • Lifestyles
  • Work and career
  • Technology
  • Digital entertainment
  • Limited
  • Free time
  • Lack of motivation
  • Mental wellbeing
  • Physical wellbeing
  • Decreased
  • Social interactions
  • Creativity
  • Self-expression
  • Negative effects
  • Society
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