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Online shopping is significantly increasing. What effects does this have people, what are demerits and what are the job opportunities.

#effects #people #demerits #job #opportunities
In recent years, e-commerce became extremely popular
among
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 society and creates
a lots
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 of job opportunities for
people
. In
this
 essay, I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of online shopping.
To begin
 with, e-shops have more options
of
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 goods selection than general
stores
for
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. Due to
this
 fact,
people
 are able to dress individually
,
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 and grab more attention
to
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themselves. As an example, British online clothes shop ASOS offer approximately 100,000 different things for both genders for cheaper prices
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that
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 retail
stores
 in shopping centres.
Consequently
, because of
big
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 choice of things,
people
 are more likely to shop online in order to follow fashion trends and present their creative looks.
Secondly
, shopping websites create employment possibilities. Online shopping is one of the ways how the local government can solve issues of unemployment rate cause job in
online
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 sector does not require education or level of experience. As an example,
the
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 global e-commerce market Amazon created around half a million
of
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job
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jobs
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 in 2021, and roundly
the
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half was generated in the holiday season due to
higher
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 amount of upcoming orders.
On the other hand
,
disadvantage
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the disadvantage
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 of
cybershopping
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cyber shopping
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 is that
person
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people
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 do not know how the product looks in real life. Many web organisations use photoshop to make products more attractive to customers, and
as a
result
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 generate additional sales.
Example
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 of
stores
 that apply photoshop on the pictures could be AliExpress and Shein. In the photos
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companies
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 websites, clothes look
luxury
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 and trendy,
however
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 in the reviews, users show how items look on them without using image editing. To conclude, online shopping has become an essential part of
present
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 human lifestyle and without it, many
people
 will not be able to
things
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 in the average
stores
.
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