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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

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In the 20th century, countries become globalisation.
People
's need to communicate with foreigners become normal compared with decades.
Thus
,
languages
 are
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important tool, which makes
people
 to be connected. I do agree fewer
languages
, which make life will be easier for several reasons. We can elaborate
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 opinion in the below paragraph.
Firstly
, fewer
languages
 can limit the
language
 barriers, which can make
people
 communicate effectively. While we travel the world, we might have certain problems communicating with different
people
 who speak different
languages
.
For example
, the British can speak English, but, they cannot speak Spanish. Because we are using different
languages
, we need to have the technology, like Google Translate to understand what we are talking about. If we do not have any tools, which need to use body
language
 to explain. While everyone is using the same
language
 they can communicate with each other easier without any barriers.
Secondly
,
people
 are focusing on productivity and effective ways to work in order to meet the rapid change world. While
people
 are using the same
languages
, which can make communication ways much quicker. Picking up a new
language
 that might need to use years to practice. If we skip out on
this
 learning process, we can use our time to make more innovations or develop our own habits. Likely, innovators prefer to choose the same
language
 background as it can make the communication without any error.
In addition
, local village
languages
 will not be taught in local schools. Students are only taught the official
language
 at schools. Because of
this
, everyone will speak the same
language
, which can make
people
 feel that they are part of the community.
For example
, if the British want to understand African culture, which might learn their local
language
 in order to communicate with dwellers.
However
, the
language
 is not popular, and they might need to find a local translator, who becomes a bridge between them. While we are using the same
language
, which will make communication much more direct and effective. In conclusion, few
languages
 in the world can make
people
 improve their quality of life, they can develop what they want no matter tangible, intangible or self-development. It can make everyone become more linked up with each other without any
language
 barriers.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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