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Some people believe that violence in the media, such as in television programs and films, directly results in violent behaviour. To what extent do you agree or disagree

#people #violence #media #television #programs #films #results #behaviour
These days people place a premium on being calm. Whit the advent of media, rough games and movies was made to entertain people. Some human beings think, that they have been having a direct effect
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 the way we behave. In
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 I want to discuss,
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affects
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. To advance a convincing theory I could deal with, its ill effects. There was an experiment in
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 that showed, students that
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 too much time
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watching movies or playing games that are too
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, it will be having
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 on their personality and
behavior
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. They act ruder and harsher.
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, the one that
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 fewer hours on
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 more polite and calm.
In addition
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 the new generation. They are really impolite and aggressive.
Although
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behavior
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 has been
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effected
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 by these things, if our personality had been shaped, we won’t have
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 problem with that. It was written in a psychology book, that it is really hard to change
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individuals
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 personality after 20. The way they act, their
mind set
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 and their goals won’t change a lot. On the grounds that
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 that age they want to have liberty and can understand what is right and what is wrong. These
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 of tv shows are not a contributing factor
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.
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dire
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 too. Or even a bad memory. To conclude, there are different reasons for
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 kind of moral, yet in the new
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 the most important one is social media and technology.
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