You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter • say what the participants liked about the hotel • explain why they were unhappy about the food • suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
Dear Sir or Madam,
We all had a good time at the meeting
last
week which was held at Sydney Airport Hotel. All the participants liked the decoration in the meeting room and were happy with the big powerPoint screen as well as the desert supplied during the break time.
However
, some of my workers complained about the lunch supplied that day was not very healthy. Firstly
, it had too much oil in the dishes, which made them lose their stomach. Another thing is that there was too much meat on the menu but not enough vegetables, thus
making the nutrition balance not even.
To sum up, It was a nice time to stay at the hotel, but I think there are some aspects that you can do better in the future. To begin
with, supply more vege food for people who don't like meat. Moreover
, tell the chief don't add too much salt and oil to the dishes. Last
, could we supply various fruit after lunch? that will make ladies and gentlemen more comfortable.
Best regards,
SammySubmitted by cchcmr88 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite