Some people believe that childhood is the best stage while others believe that a person can enjoy more happiness in other stages of life. Discuss both of views and give your opinion.

Many

people

find that they were very happy as teenagers,

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find that

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adult hood

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was more enjoyable than

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childhood years.In my opinion,I agree with

this

point because the happiest periods of

life

can vary from person to person. To

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with, the

first

point is,

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stage of

life

has its joys and sorrows. Many

people

remember their Teenage

year

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years

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with the greatest importance. There are several

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for

this

. Most

people

would enjoy a greater sense of freedom during their college or high school days. Since In those years friendship and brotherhood were in the prime of

life

and many experienced joyful

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.

For example

, college fresher parties and sporting events were great ways to get together and have fun.

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, during

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childhood,most children were active minding.So,all day they had playing games like cricket.Which,

their

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was increase the sports skills.It will be helpful in future.

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,they

have

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not

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a tension

their

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life

as well as that age,they do not have any type of burden.

On the other hand

, adult

life

offers several, positive

vand

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and

bad

moment

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.Most adults fondly remember their happy moments.

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as

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their

first

home or job,the celebration day or birthday and so on.

However

,with age

people

also

develop and evolve qualities

such

as maturity and understanding.These factors can bring a sense of satisfaction and stability,which in turn contributes to long term happiness in many

people

's lives.

In addition

,the mature person has a lot of stress in

life

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,they

not has

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easily

live

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. In conclusion, adult and

teenagers

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life

has

its

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fair share of ups and downs.While the lack of responsibility makes

life

entertaining in early

life

.It is the

fulfillment

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of one's

drems

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dreams

.

However

,

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believe that everyone can be satisfied without being dependent on other ages.