Some people believe that childhood is the best stage, while others believe that a person can enjoy more happiness in other stages of life.

Happiness
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is an emotional state characterized by
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a feeling
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feeling
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feelings
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of joy, satisfaction, contentment and
fulfillment
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. While
happiness
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has many different
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, it is often described as involving positive emotions and
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satisfaction.
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several
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accept that youth is the best stage of pleasure.
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other
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think that
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individual can like more
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in other states of
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. I am strongly convinced that contentment is a direction
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a place. I will discuss both views in
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given essay. To commence with, yes, childhood is the best stage of pleasure, that children are happy when they have something, they are ' good at ' and when their family and other important
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in their lives notice and appreciate these skills.
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, young ages are the easiest period of
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for each person. To illustrate it, kids
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from
1 to 10 years are free and have carefree lives. They do not concerned about any serious problems, which means
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them with an opportunity to live happily and enjoy doing
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their
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, children have habits to laugh and smile, which means that it is the best duration of
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.
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, it seems to me that
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individual can enjoy more
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in other states of
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. The most significant reason is the fact that most adults fondly remember their cherished
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,
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as their
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home or job, the celebration of
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wedding day , the
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birth
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so on.
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,
people
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also
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develop and evolve qualities like
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, maturity and understanding. These factors can bring
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turn contributes to
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happiness
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in many
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's lives. In conclusion, adult and teenager
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its fair share of ups and downs. While I strongly believe that everyone can be satisfied without being dependent on other ages. All growth stages can enjoy more though childhood is the happiest stage than other living stones.

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