Bringing in foreign workers to fill positions that domestic workers are unwilling to do can cause problems in the local community and should, therefore, be stopped. Do what extent do you agree with this.

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foreign

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should be stopped to fill positions that domestic

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do not want because it will cause issues in the local

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. I disagree with

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statement because of the importance of diversity and foreign

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bring

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in economic growth in the local

community

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. Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries for better job

opportunity

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, their

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bring their culture and moral values

into

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the

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they are migrating

too

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. Local people learn to broaden their

perspective

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perspectives

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by learning from them. Diversity

enchances

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enhances

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and

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bring more harmony

in

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the

community

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, America is a melting pot of many cultures and ethnicity and is considered to be one of the happiest

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country

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in the world.

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, foreign

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bring

in

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knowledges

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pieces of knowledge

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and knowledge

in

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organization

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an organization

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that domestic

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does

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not have. They can train domestic

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workers

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to be more skilled and eventually bring innovation

in

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the

country

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which

improve

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the economic growth of the

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, Saudi

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is one of

richest

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country

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countries

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in the world because they hired skilled foreign

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and train

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local

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and now they work together to bring solutions to the issues in the

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. In conclusion,

Forieign

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help the

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by

diversify

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the

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and

bring

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creativity, innovation and economic growth to the

country

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and the

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